Midst Toil and Tribulation

If you like the nuts and bolts and have patience with extensive repetition and cover-explaining, this one’s for you

This is the sixth book in the safehold series, which began with Off Armageddon Reef. That first book was excellent; a book I enjoyed very much. This book, however, is incredibly disappointing. I have a number of complaints:
1. It is unbelievably boring. If you like reading a chapter where two minor characters spend 15 pages talking about how to make a new slight improvement in firearms or other military technology, then perhaps you'll like this book. Seriously, where are the editors? At least half of these pages could be completely eliminated. The content of those pages could be briefly summarized, thus allowing the story to flow more smoothly and be less boring. The level of detail is not necessary and often annoying throughout the book. There are entire chapters where 2 or 3 people just talk about cannons, rifles, or steam engines. Yes, I get it: they're learning how to reinvent stuff made on Earth long ago. Now let's move on and get to some battle scenes, the one place where the story is less boring. Although even the battle scenes are weak compared to Off Armageddon Reef.
2. There is way too much description of every single thought going through the minds of the characters in a given chapter. One character will ask a question, and the other character will think about it for several paragraphs before finally answering the question. By that time I've almost forgotten what the question was. One rule on writing: Show, don't tell.
3. The spelling of the characters' names is really irritating. It was a little odd in the first book, but by now I'm really annoyed at how every name is filled with z, w, or y. Just write Peter instead of Paytwr, for example. I mean, it can't be much fun for Weber himself to have to type these crazy names out all day when he's writing the book.
4. Minor spoiler at this point: there is almost no real plot advancement in the whole novel despite being 600 pages. This is the sixth book in the series, and at this point there will be at least 50 books by the time we even see characters in space ships fighting the Gbaba. I can't imagine Weber ever really finishing this series. And for these reasons this will be the last safehold book I buy.
5. Another issue is how there are hundreds of characters, the vast majority of whom are really minor. And with the horrible spelling of all the names it just makes it so hard to keep track of who is who. There is an index in the back to read about them, but it's just sad that such an index is even necessary. Furthermore, most characters are practically identical. They all have the habit of speaking ironically when talking to friends or colleagues. They all speak "dryly" to quote Weber, a word he uses several hundred times in the book. They joke around with ironic speech and then get all serious, and oftentimes use the same exact phrases as each other. It seems like lazy writing and a way to have really shallow characters.
In summary, I would not recommend this book. It's sad, because I have enjoyed many of Weber's other novels and this particular series started with promise, but this latest book is so bogged down with massive detail that the plot is going nowhere.

The books keep getting longer and the story is told less and less. Pages and pages and pages of nothing. No plot advancement And only a thin grease of character of development. Yet another in the great lines of RR Martin style milk it for all it’s worth tripe. This is the last of my money and you will never get David. Telling a story for the sake of a good story should be the number one goal of an author. You used to know that. Shame on you.